My business presentation (Task 7)

Here is my business presentation which I pitched yesterday to Nas, Amar and Sam. I think that my presentation was done well, but when I was doing the presentation out to the people I think that I stuttered quite a lot and didn't get out what I wanted to say properly.

My Business Presentation Jahmal Crowe

Here is the feedback which I got from all three of them:

Nas:

. Nice design

. Used the keynote for what it is.

Amar:

. Good idea for people to submit their own designs.

. Stock them? Market towards being fun.

. Too similar to talking tee's. Make it different.

Sam:

. Lack of confidence which made presentation weak.

. Target audience should be 14-20, not as broad as you said.

. Target holiday groups and analyse 19-20 year olds going to ibiza.